Evaluation of StringCheese by ngh3bfkf
In my opinion, even though it works, you should probably use more credible sources than yourself. However, I do think it added something that we can all relate to. Besides citing some more sources, just make sure you check your grammar and add some more content to meet the length requirements before you turn in the final copy. I also agree with another person who reviewed your paper in that it is probably not necessary to mention God. Some people may take offense to this.
Good luck with your policy paper, I really think you will do well!
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- StringCheese last edited on 19 April 2005 at 11:22 pm by ngh3bfkf