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evaluation by tennisgurl

Your paper really sounds great. You have a well organized and thoughtout work. However, although you explain the topic and your points well, you lack evidence to provide credibility to your paper. I realize that you already have realized this, but to be quite honest, that is all that I can recommend that you do to improve your paper. You have done a great job.

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