tennisgurl's review radja34's paper
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I think that you have started well because you know what you are trying to say and you have some interesting points, as well. However, I believe that your paper lacks some organization and in-depth explanation of the aspects of Title ix. All you need to to is to improve orgnization and elaborate on your points and you will have a fantastic paper.
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