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You have done a really good job of writing this policy paper. You have made your position quite clear and given many examples that support your position. The continuous quotations from the texts really are helpful in keeping the reader engaged and assured that your statement is credible. As a suggestion you should include more of your own words in between the exerpts from your resources. However, you really are doing a great job!
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