Evaluation of paper toejam
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I think you have a good paper but you need some changes. Always check for grammar in your paper for starters. I don't think it is carrect to use bullets points in your paper think of another way to mention those items. You also need to cite your quotes so the readers know where you got them from. You have great information you just need to make little adjustments.
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- polantigua last edited on 11 June 2005 at 10:07 am by aforte