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Evaluation by toejam

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I think that your toughts are put together well and your essay has good structure. You may want to be careful about your grammar. I think your paper has good definition between punishment and rehabilitation but what is your objective? I also think you should use another pronoun instead of "he/she or him/her". Be sure to revise your paper.

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