Dr_Watson's evaluation of Lou_Dog
Your paper seems well put together, although I don't think the idea of upping gas prices would be widely accepted (especially to non-SUV drivers who aren't gas-hogs) but it would probably be effective. I really liked that you showed examples of other countries' efforts to reduce air pollution and gave easily doable alternatives for the general public (ie: carpooling). You have a few minor grammatical errors, but those will be easy to catch when you do your final draft. Other than that I would just say make it a little longer.
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- Lou_Dog last edited on 19 April 2005 at 11:45 pm by Lou_Dog