Evaluations of Savageronald paper by btnharmony
In the beginning you use the word "it's," which can be a little confusing. Specify what "it's" is, so that your readers is not trying to figure out what is what. Really good use of sources, though I would include a couple of quotes, to present your argument with exact quotes that support your thesis. Research is well done and I really admire your ability to not only specify the problem, but also to present an answer to solve the problem. This means that you've done your research, because you've found a legitimate solution to your problem.
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- SavageRonald last edited on 19 April 2005 at 7:33 pm by StrongBad