Evaluations of headsortails paper by btnharmony
Overall this paper seemed well researched, though I would like to see more use of the sourced being incorporated in to the argument. Try quoting sources, which is very useful in defending a position. In your conclusion, I feel that you should make your point a little stronger. For example, dont say "I believe" and just say what you want to. This will make for a stronger argument, becasue the audience is seeing that the idea you believe is based on your experience and thus will cause up some doubt. Overall information is there, all you need to do is find the connection between the facts and what your argument statement.
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- headsortails last edited on 9 April 2005 at 10:36 pm by btnharmony