Comment by Whyllus
I personally think that your paper is well developed for what you have now. You also do a good job in differentiating your beliefs on this issue as opposed to the belief of the public. I must say myself, I am one that feels punitive against rehabilitation of criminal. But when you went ahead and mention individuals in the same group as me, it immediately caught my attention. Somehow, it felt like your paper was kind of speaking out to me. Good job.
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