Comments by AdamSmith
You have a pretty good idea, but I think you have to elaborate more to get to the 1200 words; you definitely have potential in your paper. One other thing is that in the second paragraph you should be able to elaborate more because the source that you mention takes basically all the space.
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- FlemDogg last edited on 11 June 2005 at 10:11 am by aforte