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Evaluation of StringCheese by DEEZ913

I am not sure how anyone else feels about this, but I feel that you lose credibility when mentioning God in your paper. I have the same argument that is played out over and over again, but everyone doesn't share the same beliefs and therefore the argument in unwarranted. Your paper may also be strenghthened(?) if you were to add statistics or numeric facts supporting your argument.
On the flip side, you do a very good job of gaining emotional appeal to your argument. You touch home with your wording and I think your essay would be convincing and leave many people thinking.
Good luck and I hope this helps some.

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