Evaluation of Cross44 by DEEZ913
Cross, I feel you have a very strong argument; bring up the minorities is a definite key point. You may also want to touch on the average income of the minorites. I could have just read the part about HOPE wrong, but it seemed aimless. I felt that you were going in one direction and didn't fully support your statement before heading in another direction. The last thing I can offer is that you reconsider using "I" in your paper. Good luck, hope I hellp some and I hope you do well.
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