Review of Pimptastic by Prometheus
There is clearly a lot of knowledge in your paper, and that is a very good sign. the advice that i could give: I think the introduction is slightly choppy and perhaps a little short - an easy fix to develope the thesis.
The same goes for the conclusion, but overall i think it was a really good paper and with just a little bit of tweeking, it'll be good stuff!
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