evaluation by StringCheese
I like the arguments established in this paper. However, there needs to be a little more research done to show maybe an example or two of some of the downfalls of the merit-based scholarships. I think you have good information, and present good points that will support the less fortunate. The conclusion needs a little work and maybe a the length of the paper could be extended. Overall, this is a quality paper. The grammar is good and the paragraphs tie together well. Good job.