FlemDogg's comments on themis' Position
In evaluating your paper I noticed that you had well written transitional sentences between related topics and paragraphs. In addition to your topic being interesting your writing style came across as well organized and clear. However, it seems a little incomplete and needs more information. I enjoyed reading your paper and you're off to a good start.
Link to this Page
- themis last edited on 19 April 2005 at 9:09 pm by themis