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Pimptastic's comments on JoeCool's draft

Your argument is well formed and provides an interesting point of view. The only thing this paper needs is some more facts. Stating your opinion won't sway people to your point of view as much as having some facts, or some quotations from famous writers or well known analysts. Other than that the draft is well written

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