Evaluation of Rough Draft by lexie801x
I completely agree with your position on the issue of Title IX. Both men and women should be aloud to reep the benefits of this great amendment. You stated in your paper that "the title is benefitting both men and women" but is it really? If it is, then how? You also spent a lot of time describing Title IX to your readers and less time defending your position on the issue. You may want to shorten the explanation and "beef up" your facts and evidence that support your position. All in all, it looks like the start to a great paper!!!
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