Evaluations of StrongBad by Nichi
Your paper seems to be well-thought-out. You had some really good thoughts and ideas. But, if you supported some of those thoughts with sources, your argument would be much stronger.
You say, "Only by establishing a set of standards for the nation can we really truly achieve unilateral voting rights for our citizenry.
These standards should apply to everyone that is eligible to vote, which should be all citizens of the United States that are 18 or older and have not been convicted of a felony." Try to give some examples of standards that should be set, and specific reasons why.
Instead of just saying, "As the nation transitions to using electronic voting devices more heavily[...]" consider whether the nation should be making this transition. If so, why? If not, why?
But, you have many good ideas! Go with that.
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- StrongBad last edited on 19 April 2005 at 9:40 pm by StrongBad