Peer Review of toejam by bwolves11

This paper is good for a rough draft, but it lacks important details on Title IX. The ideas are all there, but this seems to be a little rushed. It could be beneficial if you went into great detail intopast events that envolved Title IX. So far it is a good start and it looks like your on the right track.

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toejam last edited on 13 April 2005 at 12:33 am by bwolves11