Peer Review of toejam by GreenRose
The tenses in this draft confounded me throughout, so that made it hard to read.
You need to expand the draft more, and I'm not sure I follow how Title XI has any sort of corrolary to the number of women earning degrees, and why other factors (the overall increase in people going to college, for example) could not be responsible for this.
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- toejam last edited on 13 April 2005 at 12:33 am by bwolves11