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I think that your paper is very well written and researched. You did a good job including factual evidence such as stats and real numbers. There are just a few grammar and word choice problems that could be looked at (just make sure you read it aloud once before submitting for a grade) but overall it is a very good paper. golf2627
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- EchoZero last edited on 18 April 2005 at 5:32 pm by EchoZero