Evaluations by FB5945
Your draft opens with a good introduction. The body of the paper contains good information about the benefits women experience through particpating in sports, but what about adding some actual numbers demonstrating the increase in women's sports teams. Also, you do not mention that Title IX could possibly have an harmful affects towards men athletics. While women have obviously experienced more benefits from Title IX, the purpose is to provide equal oppurtunities... is it fair to cut men's sports to do so? Or could there be an alternate, more fair solution? Just a thought, but personally, I would at least include a sentence or two saying that there have been some problems with Title IX.
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- TBFrosty44 last edited on 19 April 2005 at 9:20 pm by TBFrosty44