Pimptastic's comments on CollegeDems's draft

This draft seems more like a rant than a properly formed argument. If you added to your draft some quotations, or some facts, your paper would prove to be more effective. As of now you cite the Sixth amendmant, but if you found some information from a published source that could help a lot

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