Pimptastic's comments on bwolves11's draft
This paper is on the right track but it's still needs more development before it will be a good paper. The ideas are all there, but this seems like a rushed essay, if you extend your arguments and expand them more, i.e. elaborate on your arguments and transition into them better this will be a great paper.
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