Evaluations of sumner by Blondieblue
I really enjoyed your paper. Although you did not have many statistics and such things as this, I felt that your use of realistic ideas almost changed my view on this topic. However, you did not answer the question exactly, which was should Georgia Tech have need or merit based aid, but I do not feel that this factor would not be hard to include in your paper. I felt that your beginning paragraph was very well written and made me want to continue reading which is always good. I do feel that your final paragraph needs to contain more of a generalized statement about financial aid whether then more examples. One of the main things that I feel that this author should work on is adding more factual evidence, which could help her to develop her ideas further. Therefore, I feel that this rough draft is very good, but could use more factual evidence.
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