Evaluation of techfans's policy paper by hmoob_ladie
You have a very good point in your paper that could be strengthen even more if you included some facts to back everything up. And I'm sure that you can find those resources easily. Tech has a very good resource site where you can look up numbers and such. Your conclusion needs to make one final punch that will REALLY help your argument. Otherwise, you're in very good shape.
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