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Dr_Watson

My Rough Draft

My Final Paper

Comments on Draft
It was well written and had a good balance of evidence and personal analysis. I think you have a duplicated paragraph that you need to edit in the beginning. For some of your evidence, citing a source or two wouldn't hurt. Also, it would be nice if you could describe how poll internet voting works (I for one haven't heard much about it). I think you could go more in depth on the Electoral College issue. If you could cite more sources on the issue, that would be valuable. If you use "dire" need of reform, make sure you make the case that it is dire rather than just "in need...". Overall well written and in good shape though.
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